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The Heaven Express

The Heaven Express

Photography Photography \ Uncategorized | 11/21/07 @338 | aortac | Comments critiques (11) | Views views (224)


The Heaven Express
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Avatar gencosman

 11/21/07 @372

Nice shot. Right corner's a bit overexposed and left side's a little dark for me.
 
Avatar mementomori

 11/21/07 @442

I kinda like the colors.. :) The contrast doesn't bother me but I'm not very found of the glow effect
 
Avatar moserArtist

 11/21/07 @610

Really nice place for a great shot.

The technical aspects could be improved as already mentioned before me.

The perfect scenario would have included less people and an angle more toward the moving train on the right hand side.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 11/21/07 @641

Nice lighting!....looks a little tilted to the right.
Carlos
 
Avatar Vasco

 11/21/07 @784

I agree about the technicalities already mencioned(overexposure/darkness/tilted). regarding the composition... I don't know if i would try to get less or more people, I would go for more people, probably more faded....
 
Avatar Daykan

 11/21/07 @829

Really nice depth sensation!
 
Avatar aortac

 11/21/07 @846

thank you
 
Charly70

 11/21/07 @981

nice place, nice light!
 
Avatar purplerose

 11/22/07 @021

Nice one.
 
Avatar Lenn0

 11/22/07 @396

nice capture! just the right exposure for the moving people, but I'd also increase a little the dark zones..
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 11/22/07 @529

Too much floor I think and the over-exposed area to the right is troublesome. I'd have stepped this down, cropped out most of the floor to 1/2 - 1" under the support beam. As the photo is, the floor and ceiling fight with each other for attention . I find the ceiling to be more interesting. A bit sharper would also be nice. This photo has so much potential and could be much better.

I hope you will revisit this place and try this again.

Good work!!!
 
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